COLD EMAILS THAT GET RESPONSES: MASTER THE ART

By: KEXY Team
November 20, 2024

Let's face it. You can’t please everyone. And honestly, why should you try? The goal here is simple: RAISE YOUR REPLY RATE. Cold emailing is akin to cold calling. You’re casting lines to folks who have zero clue about you or your biz, hoping to ignite their interest.

NAIL IT, and cold email outreach becomes a LEAD GEN POWERHOUSE. Many startups thrive on this during their early days.

WHY YOUR COLD EMAILS FALL FLAT

Ever wonder why your emails get the silent treatment? Let’s dive into the workplace psyche. A study from the University of Waterloo nails it down:

  1. Time or effort required.
  2. Sender’s identity.
  3. Number of recipients.
  4. Recipient’s workload.
  5. Message urgency.

Most times, your prospects are swamped at work. But here’s the kicker: Cold emailing is about PEOPLE, not just numbers. Show some empathy. Understand their struggles. Your emails will stand out.

Ditch the mass email scraping. Focus on QUALIFIED prospects. Craft emails with empathy, not ego.

BOOST YOUR RESPONSE RATE WITH THESE TIPS

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1. KILLER EMAIL SIGNATURE

Your signature is a TRUST INDICATOR. Keep it simple, but make it count. Include:

  • Full name
  • Job title
  • Phone number
  • Website or LinkedIn
  • Photo (best) or company logo (decent)

2. TARGET THE RIGHT AUDIENCE

Know your prospects. It’s not always about the big boss. Often, it’s about the department heads. For instance, selling POS systems to restaurants? Target the General Manager. They’ll champion your cause up the chain.

3. CAPTIVATING SUBJECT LINE

Your subject line is your HEADLINE. It’s the gateway to your email. Make it irresistible. Elements to consider:

  • Personalization
  • Curiosity
  • Promise
  • Instant gratification
  • Humor
  • Urgency

Examples:

  • “You’ve Changed” – UrbanDaddy
  • “Don’t Open This Email” – Manicube
  • “14.2 pounds gone in just 1 week (here’s how)” – Healthpreneur

4. OPTIMIZE THE OPENING LINE

The first line is crucial. It’s the preview in their inbox and your first chance to hook them. Avoid boring intros. Try: “Noticed you offer landscaping services in Atlanta and thought I'd introduce myself."

5. ADD SOCIAL PROOF

People love to follow the crowd. Use social proof:

  • Customer testimonials
  • User numbers
  • Portfolio samples
  • Customer reviews
  • Celebrity endorsements
  • Credentials
  • Case studies
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6. KEEP IT SHORT

Time is money. Don’t waste theirs. Be brief, especially if you’re not yet on their radar.

7. CLOSE STRONG

End with a clear CTA. Use questions to guide them:

  • “Does starting work without cleanup sound good? Click here for a free discovery call."
  • “Available for a 15-minute chat this week? Click here to book."

Empathy transforms cold emails into compelling conversations. Understand the SCIENCE and ART of email writing. Introduce a bit more HEART, and watch your response rates soar.

Source: https://keap.com/small-business-automation-blog/marketing/email-marketing/tips-for-writing-cold-emails-that-get-responses

SCOTT GRAHAM

Co-Founder

FORREST YOUNG

Co-Founder
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